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Be A Critic Volume 1

Thu Nov 1, 2012, 6:27 AM

The Challenge


:bulletblack: Pick at least one of the thumbs above*
:bulletblack: Read it
:bulletblack: Comment or Critique it**
:bulletblack: Leave a comment on THIS journal with the following:
:bulletwhite: A link to your comment on the deviation you chose***
:bulletwhite: A link to one of your deviations you'd like to have feedback on

:bulletblack: Wait for the results to come out!

Start Date: NOW!


End Date: November 13, 2012 @ 11:59PM EST



The Prizes


:bulletblack: One random winner will receive a comment/critique from me.
:bulletblack: A second random winner will receive 50:points:




*Commenting/critiquing on more than one of the deviations will increase your odds of winning.  There is a strict limit of three entries per deviant.
**A Comment is a few lines, possibly a paragraph, about your opinion of the story.  It usually includes something that you really liked and should include at least one thing that can be improved.  A Critique is many paragraphs about the deviation and will include both personal opinion as well as correction to technical errors.
***To get a link to your comment, once you've submitted it, click on the time stamp.


The first of hopefully many Critique Challenges!
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:iconvivafariy:
VivaFariy Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Are they mature content? (inappropriate)
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violetense Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Writer
Comments:
[link]
[link]

Deviation:
[link]
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Writer
Awesome! You've been entered twice!
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violetense Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Writer
:squee:
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DNA-The-Authoress Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Too busy right now to critique something of that length, but I'd definitely like to participate another time!
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Writer
I'm going to be running these bi-weekly, so there'll always be an opportunity!
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:icondna-the-authoress:
DNA-The-Authoress Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Cool! Thanks for doing this!
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Nububu Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, so it's like tit for tat. That's a really good idea. :meow:

Maybe if I end up making some art I'd like some constructive criticism on I'll try this out. :XD:
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Writer
Thank you!

I have a few deviants booked already, but if you're interested, please feel free to drop me a note.
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Nububu Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe, you're welcome xD

Thank you for the kind offer. :D I'll try to remember that. ^^
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MeganLawler94 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Writer
I never knew that about the time stamp! I need to do more random clicking.

You probably know that most of the time I can't get into fantasy or sci-fi, so I'm pushing myself specifically for this contest to try to broaden my horizons. (Plus, the piece I decided to critique was quite interesting!)

My Critique

Feedback on this one, please!
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Writer
I learned about it for the Poop Throwing extravaganza earlier this year. Otherwise, I wouldn't know either.

:highfive:

Thanks for doing a crit. You've been officially added into the prize pool.
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MeganLawler94 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional Writer
Only on the Internet is a "Poop Throwing Extravaganza" socially acceptable :giggle:
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:icongrimface242:
GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Writer
Exactly.
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:iconmeganlawler94:
MeganLawler94 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional Writer
The Internet is also the best place for me to procrastinate on my writing. Shame on me :no:
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:icongrimface242:
GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Writer
Me too. I turned off my WiFi earlier. Now I just have my Squashy chat open and occasionally check my messages here. But that's it.
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:iconmeganlawler94:
MeganLawler94 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional Writer
It'll be difficult to get the writing done at this point. There's a lot going on... I'll still try, though. Hopefully I can get something done.
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mirz-alt Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   General Artist
:heart: Featured here ---> Volume 14.
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:icongrimface242:
GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012   Writer
:love:

Thank you.
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012   Writer
:eager:
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here's a link to my critique of *TarienCole's Thunder's Echo: Teaser.

And here's the piece I'd like to receive a critique on, Submerged in Swan Lake. I don't normally write poetry, so any advice is greatly appreciated so that I may hone my craft. :la:

:heart: *OfOneSoul
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012   Writer
Awesome! I'll be honest, if you win the critique, it may not be the greatest, but I'll try my best. :ashamed:
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hon, any criticism is certainly welcome. :love: Lovely project idea as well. :nuu: I'll try to participate as often as you host it. :happybounce:
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TarienCole Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm flattered to be your guinea pig...even in November. ;)
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:icongrimface242:
GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012   Writer
:giggle: I just imagined a flattened guinea pig.
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TarienCole Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:lol:
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TarienCole Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm flattered to be your guinea pig...even in November. ;)
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fenicksreborn Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Writer
Alright, I critiqued the piece by *TarienCole and you can find my comment here.

The piece I would like to see be critiqued/commented/reviewed is this one, but really, anything in my Writing WIP folder would do as well. :)
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:icongrimface242:
GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012   Writer
Awesome. Thanks for commenting. You've been entered in for prizes!
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:iconfenicksreborn:
fenicksreborn Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Cool! Welcome! :)
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:icontariencole:
TarienCole Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the comments, btw. Much appreciated. :salute:
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:iconfenicksreborn:
fenicksreborn Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
You're most welcome! :)
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:iconmeganlawler94:
MeganLawler94 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Professional Writer
I'm not sure if I'll be able to participate, at least not during this month. November is kind of jam-packed, but I might try to get it done.
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012   Writer
I know November is a bad month, but I wanted to give the non-Nanoers something to do too.
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MeganLawler94 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Professional Writer
That's true. It's so weird to me that people don't do NaNo. :giggle: I don't know why. I think everyone should at least try!

I was up at midnight to ring in November, and with the writing I did earlier and since I've been awake, I've written 2,000 words. I think I'm in good shape; I can probably do this, too. It'll keep me busy.
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